Dear Portfolio Committee,
I didn’t really have any doubts coming into this class that I was not going to succeed in making the most of my work. In addition to learning new lessons in strengthening my writing skills. From structure to new advanced styles in writing I believe that all of my abilities as a writer have not only enhanced but lengthened as well. Writing is definitely a strong suit of mine and I am always prepared to learn innovative ways to improve my writing techniques. In the next few paragraphs I will walk you threw a few of the assignments I thought fit best to present to you guys to experience my hard work I put into this class.
My last assignment I decided to put first for one reason only I thought it the closest to my style of writing and that I really captured it perfectly. This Topic was within the pure idea if technology is killing communication. The writing assignment asked me to make a claim that along with references can be proved while still allowing an argument to be made. Then while analyzing and backing up the main point someone would be able to provide reasons why this may have been misinterpreted. This was a great way to present something I believe in back it up with formed opinions on top of facts while allowing myself to see the view from someone elses eyes.
My second writing assignment was interesting because it was a summary on a writing journal from a man named Nicolas Car in regards to an argument which stressed the fact that technology is in fact making us stupid. He goes on a couple different tangents which properly back us this point as such from web skimming to scenarios which go out on a whim to say that the internet is more or less changing our frame of thought like some type of clock work. I did enjoy writing a summary response to this topic because if the obvious growth in technology in the last couple decades. I will say I didn’t entirely agree with his rant about the online use dumbing people down although only because there is millions upon millions of different things to explore online that most people wouldn’t bother to research without quick access to it. So my response was more or less in the opposite context saying that the internet when used properly is actually improving peoples minds.
One of my favorite of class work was the Ethnography again not a style of writing I was used to but was able to nail the format of it and hit it home. In this project I was asked to walk you threw the culture which makes up my Verizon store between the feel along with the interaction between customers and a sales associate and what made up the community of the business. I do believe that I was able to take a screen shot of a small yet brief moment at my store which in turn would make up a better understanding of the subculture in what makes the store run. This was also an exciting task because it allowed me to share something I live everyday in my professional business outside of classes.
My Final writing assignment was a memoir, which challenged my writing because of my theme I had chosen for the semester. My subject was Technology and my story was in regards to my early experiences in high school and how architecture became the major that was re enforced directly motivating me to go to college. I do believe that my growth threw these moments really did provide me the motivation to choose my career in architecture. I am proud of this piece because it does show the improvement to such a uncommon writing style that I am not used to, which you will see in the excerpt.
This class was exciting from the start as I say all the time there is always something to learn in English. I did have a great time in this class in exception to a couple hang ups I had throughout the semester but my teacher was is the greatest and had given us far more time than most needed but is was a kind gesture.